اجابة على "فكرة جديدة "قصة قصيرة. [closed]

Question

اجابة على اكتب قصة قصيرة او حكمة بالانجليزية فكرة جديدة

                         correct my mistaks if any

 In some day there was a dove made her nest in the       treetop  after hard work , but a sly fox came right to her and said :if you don't give me your babies i will eat you , then she did what he say , although she did ,he doesn't stop comming evrey time . a sly fox

one day a bird named :Malek El -Hazin, saw her and knew her sad story and tell her a plan :when the fox come don't do what he wants and if he can climbs the tree throat away .

the dove did this but the fox askes her :who tell you to do this !? she replaied :Malek El-Hazin 

Then he went to him and said :if the wind came from the right side where you put your head ? Malek answer him :in my left 

"? and if its came from the left " 

I'll put it in my right 

 "?and if the wind came from every side " 

i put it under mu wings 

you are the birds more smart then us , in an hour  you do what we do in a  year  , show me how can you do it 

When the bird did that the fox jumped and eat him and said :the enemy of himself , you give the dove an advice and forget yourself ,

 so your enemy can get you ..... 

Answer 1

It happened that a dog had got a piece of meat and was carrying it home in his mouth to eat it in peace ... Now one his way home he had to cross a plank lying across running brook .. As he crossed . he looked down and saw his one shadow reflected in the water beneath ... thinking it was another dog with another piece of meat .. he made up his mind to have that also .. so he made a snap at the shadow in the water .. but as he opened his mouth .. the piece of meat feel out . dropped into the water and was never seen more ..... Beware lest you lose the substance by grasping at the shadow 

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Thanks a lot 

Good luck 

Comments

You hit two birds with one stone, so you told us a story and gave us wisdom at the same time

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your story is amazing , i like it
Greed spoils charactor.
goooooooooood luck.

Answer 2

in the last line of the first part

it should be coming every

Comments

Thanks a lot
good luck.

Answer 3

accept

  fantastic story

Comments

Thank you elsayed eid
goooooood luck

Answer 4

i like your story

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Thank you so much
goooood luck.

Answer 5

Askes ---> asked

كل القصة بالماضي عدت هذه الكلمة والسؤال

وهنالك بعض الأخطاء الكتابية لكن اعتقد انها سقطت سهواً منك مثل than .. my

Comments

شكرا جزيلا على الملاحظة فانا حقا لم انتبه لهذا .
إنَّ الصداقة أن تكون من الهوى             كالقلب للرئتين ينبض هــادره
استلهم الإيمان من عتباتهــــــــا             ويظلني كرم الإله ونائـــــــره
 يا أيها الخل الوفيُّ تلطـــــــــفا             قد كانت الألفاظ عنك لقاصــره
 وكبا جواد الشعر يخذل همتـي             ولربما خذل الجوادُ مناصِـــرَه
بالتوفيق للجميع.

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العفو ... جميييل جدا❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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الجميل يرى كل شيئ جميلا .
انه يصف عائلتي طليق لذا لا بد من أنه جميل .

Answer 6

جميلة جدا في الحقيقة اعجبتني كثيرا

Comments

الحمد لله أنها نالت على اعجابكم كنت غير موقنة بانها ستعجبكم .
بالتوفيق للجميع.

Answer 7

wonderful significance .the believer starts with himself 

do not give advice to others and you are oblivious to it

    thank you queen myself                              

Comments

Thank you a lot bouchra.
هذا من بين العِبر المستفادة من القصة , ومعرفتك لها يعني أنك استفدتِ منها وفهمتها , أتمنى ان يفهمها الجميع ويأخذ منها عبرة ما ولو كانت فقط عبرة واحدة .
بالتوفيق للجميع , و بالتوفيق لك بشرى.

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شكرا , بالتوفيق لك ايضا

Answer 8

Someday ... when things are okay ..you will look back and feel proud 

.. that you did not give up 

Good luck 

Comments

Dont be sad if you stumbled someday , and remember that the arrow has to go back ...to go forward ....strongly.

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Yeah ; that is the true

Answer 9

الحقيقة انا عندي استفسارين.. 

..then she did what he say , although she did-

لماذا قلتي say و لم تقولي said، هل لإن did موجوده؟ لكن الجملة ليست سؤال.. تلخبطت بهالنقطه. 

..when the fox come

و هنا ما اضفتي ( s) للفعل رغم انه طرف ثالث، ما السبب؟ هل لإن الجملة تعبر عن المستقبل؟

Comments

كلها أخطاء بدرت مني عن غير قصد , شكرا للملاحظة و التصحيح , ولكن أظن بأنه مع did قال الاستاذ ابراهيم عادل بانها لا يجب ان تاتي مع فعل آخر في الماضي البسيط في نفس الجملة .
بالتوفيق للجميع وشكرا على المرور الرائع.

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عفواً، ماتوقعته تصحيح لأني حتى انا ملخبطه شوي.
أجمعين يارب.،